Every Friday, writers from around the globe join in sharing their flash fiction stories, each tiny tale written in response to a photo prompt posted on Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’ blog. Anyone can take part, but if you’d prefer not to write, then we’d love you to simply enjoy the stories as a reader.
You can find our stories for this week below, whilst the stories crafted by other writers can be found here. Our earliest stories can be found on our old blog.
Image copyright: Roger Cohen
Jo’s Story ~ Cello Hello
“This is snug.”
“You’re not wrong. Your strings are tangling in mine.”
“Well, sorry!”
“No, no, I didn’t mean – ”
“It’s not my fault we’re standing so close!”
“But I’m happy with – ”
“I don’t even want to be played at this concert, anyway.”
Hesitation. “You don’t?”
“No! I hate performing before a crowd!”
“Really? You always seem so confident.”
“Appearances can deceive!”
“Well . . . if you perform that well, feeling scared, you’re more amazing than I thought!”
“Oh . . . d’you think so?”
“Absolutely – you’re fantastic.”
“I had no idea . . .”
Silence.
Beautiful music crests the air.
[106 words]
Ron’s Story ~
I’m so strung out
And I’m boxed in
No room to even quaver
Note all pressing in around
A bridge too far
As some may achord
Hid plectrumed away
Feeling so hollow inside
Still fret you not
My gut does say
Bow strongly and accept
Saddled here so scrolled away
Peg that melody
And tune in fine
We’ll reach the pit
F-holed up to end
[66 words]
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Loved both of them and I can hear the conversation playing in my head even now.
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Thank you, Linda! Let’s hope they don’t become a stuck record. 😉
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I doubt that very much indeed Joanna, your writing has never had that unfortunate quality about it 🙂
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Cello Hello – How comes no one else thought of that? Brilliant 😀
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Oh, thanks! Just me being silly with words, really! 😉
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A nice play on words, both of them. Well done.
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Thank you, Sandra 🙂
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Ok both are so different and clever!!! I don’t know how you two do this, lol. You make it look easy. Loved them both.
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Thanks so much, Kristin! It’s fun – even more so now we’re on WordPress! 😉
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i love Jo’s story…very creative dialogue there…Nicely done!
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Thank you, Charles! 🙂
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Cute offerings…both of them. Love a good play on words.
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Thanks, Rochelle; glad you enjoyed. 🙂
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Love the dialogue in Jo’s Story – strong characters both. And enjoyed the word play in Ron’s. Well done.
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Thanks, Sarah Ann. 🙂
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The first one was my favourite. It was lovely listening to the conversation between two lovestruck cellos.
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Thank you, Mike!
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What fun! Are there really two of you or just a split personality? (Don’t know why that just popped into my head, but I think reading all the FF stories puts those sort of thoughts front and center and I couldn’t resist.) 🙂
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LOL!!!! Yes, there really are two of us. Co-authors and the very best of friends. 🙂
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I really knew that but just couldn’t help my self. Glad to hear it confirmed, though. 🙂
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Sometimes you just can’t. 😀
We’re actually both quite different in some respects, so it makes for an interesting business and writing partnership at times…… 😮
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Bill (of the Zeds) and I are also very different in many ways which is usually great, although we don’t write together. Hmmmm, maybe Zed love stories?? 🙂
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Both of these are great!! The first one made me smile and the second one is really clever 🙂
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Thank you, Hayley! 🙂
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good ones! I loved the dialog, but secretly I’m a poet at heart. I declare a tie! You two make beautiful music ( laughing )
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LOL, thank you, Bill, a tie is happily accepted! That’s good to hear, since the novels are a long-term duet! 😉
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both are great 🙂 enjoyed reading them, really ^^
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Thank you! 🙂
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Love me some poetry … especially with music in it. Thank-you!
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Glad you enjoyed it! Ron’s always had the heart of a poet. 🙂
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Good characterizations. If instruments could talk…nice play on words, and good paced dialogue. It was very easy to read and feel.
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed them. 🙂
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I admire the dialog, and I love the poetry. Good wordplay makes my day.
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Thank you, Bjorn 🙂
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Dear Joanna and Ron,
Point and counterpoint in your two fine pieces, the first lovely and fair, the second a strong play on words and shape and function. Well done to you both.
Aloha,
Doug
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Thank you, Doug – and thanks for visiting our new little home 🙂 Aloha!
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I like the part about thinking other people are so confident. Clever poem, Ron… I don’t think you missed anything.
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Thanks, Ted! Ron said he did a bit of research for his piece – he does like wordplay, so that was right up his street. 🙂
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Good work!
I particularly like how the angry cello changes tone when she(?) realises that the other thinks she is amazing.
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Thanks, Abraham! Sorry, your comment got stuck in the Spam filter for some reason, and I’ve only just realised it’s there! Oops….
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consider this change:
“You’re not wrong. Your strings are tangling in mine.”
“I know. Our strings are tangled.”
the line “you’re not wrong” sounds awkward.
well done.
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Thanks, Rich. Perhaps the phrasing works better on this side of the Atlantic. 😉
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Love them both…but i have to say i am partial to Jo’s story this week. I could see myself been that cello…very well done
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Thank you! I think a lot of people are crammed inside that cello. 🙂
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